Points of light filter in
breaking through
illuminating-
contemplating
just how long it will last.
The shape of the shadow flowing in the wind.
Like the wedding of an unlikely pair
proves more exists than can be seen.
A new day brings with it the unanswered.
Yeah, I woke up still drunk this morning and got some inspiration to write a poem. Never did that before. Anyways.... I'm probably heading back to RI at some point this weekend, anything happenin'?
-Lt
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WOWWWW! That's really good lee. very simple imagery with a lesson in between each line. I'm really liking this man.
Hey Lee, nice job. I like that second stanza a lot. Good work, you should be inspire more often.
yo lee, i really enjoyed the mysterious nature of this poem. like someone said above, the 'simple imagery' works very well to gather a much more complex meaning. oh yea, lovin it boi!
roz
lee you are a man of few words and much mystery. more exists than can be seen. ever? ever. i dig.
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